Kia Ora Arielle this is Arli from Grey Main school I really like this detailed and colourful post about why people have pets you have lots of great statements on this topic keep up the great work Arli.
KIa ora Arielle, You have explained clearly some reasons people like to have pets. During lockdown I heard that people were adopting cats and dogs to help out the SPCA and for more fun and company during a quieter than usual time. I especially liked you personal sharing of how you were comforted by aunty's dog.
My name is Maddison I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! Awesome work!
I love pets and I relate to this blog post! I think that this is such an cool idea to write a blog about! Did you enjoy it?
I think that this is awesome I love how you stuck to a colour theme and made it very eye catching! What's your favorite colour?
Even though this is absolutely amazing there is a few things that I think you could improve on, one being to make sure to check your spelling dont worry even I forget to do this but it makes your blog post so much easier to understand. A Another thing is to make sure that you give the readers enough detail! Keep up the good work! -Maddie
Hello Arielle, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you made it visually appealing and easy to read.
This reminds me of when I made a google drawings about what pet you should get.
To improve, you could write why you made this above or below the google drawing.
Why did you blog about this?
Cya later Arielle, keep it up!
-Amelia
Kia Ora Arielle this is Arli from Grey Main school I really like this detailed and colourful post about why people have pets you have lots of great statements on this topic
ReplyDeletekeep up the great work
Arli.
KIa ora Arielle, You have explained clearly some reasons people like to have pets. During lockdown I heard that people were adopting cats and dogs to help out the SPCA and for more fun and company during a quieter than usual time. I especially liked you personal sharing of how you were comforted by aunty's dog.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Maddison I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.
WOW! Awesome work!
I love pets and I relate to this blog post!
I think that this is such an cool idea to write a blog about! Did you enjoy it?
I think that this is awesome I love how you stuck to a colour theme and made it very eye catching! What's your favorite colour?
Even though this is absolutely amazing there is a few things that I think you could improve on, one being to make sure to check your spelling dont worry even I forget to do this but it makes your blog post so much easier to understand. A Another thing is to make sure that you give the readers enough detail!
Keep up the good work!
-Maddie